For an amateur writer and amateur thinker what you just did, the patience of adnotating and raising valid points all over, is like some kind of undescribable gift. There are about two years of ideas merged into one long thing, the closer to the end the more focused (i should hope).
As you can see, overall the essay is a combination of practical hypotheses and philosophical proposals. I can only hope your patience with my stitched knowledge on some of the hardest subjects existing, will last long enough! :)